Hurricane Havoc

"Hurricane Havoc" dangerous winds rage uprooting trees to tumble drenched by rain torrents. flooding waters wrath swallow bridges crumbled stones violence and death. power lines cascade sparking flames igniting homes volatile darkness. ocean waves invade breaching sand dunes overflow beaches dwell with fish. hurricane havoc shelters contain precious life Mother Nature cries. *For SandyIvy Davis's Hurricanes - Only Haiku Contest. *American Haiku 5/7/5 syllable count.
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Chakrabarty Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 3:20 AM
Mother Nature cries...so horrible ..true nature of hurricane...devastating angry nature. Great one Linda_Marie wow!!! rajat
A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:13 AM
love the twist.. SKAT
A   Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Linda my bff, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always* PD
Poet Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Awesome write Linda!Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 1:42 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Linda xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 12:03 AM
and you were right there, so you KNOW, Linda. Way to describe it, and congrats on the win.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:13 PM
WON 5TH PLACE .. THANKXXX
May Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:04 PM
congrats on a great win Linda
Ivy D Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:01 PM
thank you' san
K. Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 7:21 AM
You've depicted the power of hurricanes well here, Linda. How I hope that the coming storm won't add too much damage -- you and all those affected continue being strong and helping each other-- thanks for asking, my mom's doing relatively ok... miss you as well and hugs to you!
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November 3, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Wow,,, Linda my bff.... , Strength in the face of havoc is always in my opinion, it is a good thing. Your haikus are powerful. I hope many of the ones who were affected by this hurricane can change tragedy into something positive. Thank you for the haiku poem :-) Good luck in the contest.. I enjoyed what I read, always~PD
Babcock Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 5:03 PM
Love the series of haiku on the storm. Hope you did not have a lot of damage. Poor people who lost all. My prayers are with them. love phyl
Devnath  Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 9:16 AM
You have left nothing to describe the phenomena of natural disasters happening at present. A reality nature's show. Wonderfully worded. Loved always, bl
Sathasivam Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 7:33 AM
A great description. Well said. Stay safe. Tfs
Horsman Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 6:59 AM
these are Haiku wonders, stay safe.....
Bauer Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 2:15 PM
great job for the contest! you nailed it!
Sivey Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Wow, now this is a powerful write Linda-Marie, I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and well written poem this afternoon! What a fantastic and intriguing piece, awesome job, Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:45 PM
wow, using something very relevant for the topic!! I had not even seen this contest posted yet. Way to do it, Linda. And I am relieved you are at least safe.
Kapoor Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:59 AM
I am concerned about you and all my friends Linda, who are facing this terrifying Nature's disaster in and out of America and hope that these hard winds would soon pass away and everyone would safe. You have sketched a very true picture of the hurricane. My prayers for the well being of all my friends. Love and best wishes. My story may take a day or two more. I will let you know...Ravindra
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 10:32 AM
WE HAVE JUST COME THRU HURRICANE SANDY MIXED WITH A NOR'EASTER .. TOTAL DEVASTATION IN NEW JERSEY ESPECIALLY ALONG THE BEACHES .. MY HAIKU COULD GO ON AND ON .. IT WAS HORRIBLE EVENT TO EXPERIENCE .. WE THANK GOD FOR BEING ALIVE AND PRAY FOR ALL IMPACTED BY THIS STORM ..
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