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HURRICANE whirlwind of the sea ~ ferocious spinning disc gaining speed and wrath the hurricane’s eye with torrential force of tears ~ winds tortuous strength wild waves warn the coast with boats crashing into docks ~ only lunes remain palms are tested as coconuts plummet like hail ~ storm assails sailboats Objects settle wind to lesser tropical storm ~ sea salt soothes the wounds 9/7/2017 Hurricane contest

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Date: 9/13/2017 9:04:00 PM
Great imigary, Kim, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
Date: 9/13/2017 12:49:00 AM
Lovely ... Congratulations for your nice win ... And I don't have the words to reciprocate your feelings around my Hurricanes ... Thank you, dear friend ... thank you ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Probir!
Date: 9/13/2017 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your placement. What a nice and true depiction of hurricane!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 9/12/2017 12:32:00 PM
Just swinging back 'round to offer my congratulations on your High-Placed win! My prediction was right :) Kind regards, John!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, John <3
Date: 9/12/2017 9:20:00 AM
Congrats Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 9/12/2017 9:11:00 AM
Very creative, Kim. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 9/11/2017 3:14:00 PM
Lovely string of Haiku, Kim! I hope to see this high on the winners' list. Best of luck in the contest! Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 9/8/2017 8:59:00 PM
Kim, the last line is so clever , bringing it all back to the sea and salt to lick the wounds! I think I must think up a clever way to do this contest as you have done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2017 9:20:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea <3 Looking forward to seeing your entry!
Date: 9/7/2017 2:12:00 PM
You have caught the wonder of the violence in your vivid images. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thanks, Janis!
Date: 9/7/2017 2:01:00 PM
Lovely imagery--lovely haiku poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 9/7/2017 1:36:00 PM
Tough to put into words, the misery they inflict but you did an admirable job Kim, best wishes...
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Date: 9/7/2017 1:01:00 PM
This is a fun one--wonderful vocabulary and apt imagery. Well done, thanks for it. Dave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, David!

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