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Hurricane

Hands crushing my ribcage Horizon fading into non-existence Order thrown aside carelessly by chaos Feelings pulsing through the impalements from finger nails in my heart Tops of pine trees bending in the force of this impending storm Connections in my spine bending from the strings in your control These winds will certainly leave us destroyed However, I am under your ruling so I follow right behind you into the hurricane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/7/2016 2:24:00 AM
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:44:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:13:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup! - A great first poem, Lily ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2016 4:28:00 PM
Lily, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:12:00 AM
Great theme, Lily, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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