Hurricane

Hands crushing my ribcage
Horizon fading into non-existence
Order thrown aside carelessly by
     chaos
Feelings pulsing through the
     impalements from finger
     nails in my heart
Tops of pine trees bending in the
     force of this impending storm
Connections in my spine bending
     from the strings in your
     control
These winds will certainly leave us
     destroyed
However, I am under your ruling so I
     follow right behind you into the
     hurricane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gigno Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:24 AM
!!!
Makama Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 8:44 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:13 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup! - A great first poem, Lily ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 1, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Lily, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 1, 2016 at 5:12 AM
Great theme, Lily, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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