Hurricane

H	ail storms of turmoil shook me to the core

U	nderstanding that look as she walked through the door

R	avaging my heart with her blatant lies

R	ipping me apart with deception in her eyes

I	nfidelity has inspired this acrostic poetry

C	arrying me away with her hellish whirlwind

A	nd so devilish is her grin, trying to cause my end

N	aturally, I do what I can to shelter my heart

E	ventually this woman will literally rip me apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Jimmy. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:17 AM
anybody reading this can definitely feel that hurricane raging with those words, Jimmy! You sure do well in making your words leap from the page, nice one...hopefully the hurricane has passed...
Sweetheart Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:57 PM
WOW Jimmy I luv this one... your words rip the page with emotion... enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Guzzi Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Sometimes we eat the bear and sometimes the bear eats us! .....Light & Love
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