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Hurdles

HURDLES Spiraling around the mountains hefty, Humming, singing songs so sweet; Touching softly pebbles underneath, Lo, there’s a brook, pure and swift! Not for once it stopped, not awhile, Not for a moment focus it lost; Danced and curled, hopped and curved, Down in the plains, quenched the thirst! A life without the thorns, imagine if you can, Possibly what would it exactly be like; No lessons, no progress, no enlightenment, Without a Guru as a learner lost! The way the Divine keeps us on the path, Patience, strength, virtues develop; Resistance, anger, natural reactions are Impeding the progress, delaying the success! Resent not, for they appear To brighten up the path, to enlighten up the soul; Companions trustworthy never do they fail, In creating an environment conducive to change! For the success, the progress, thank the impediments, For they are the ones that hold you strong; With the will, the power, let the race be won, Quit not betwixt, vanquish the Hurdles!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/14/2021 1:25:00 PM
A pleasure to find your charming poem in the 2020 PS Anthology, Giti ~
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Giti Tyagi
Date: 9/15/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Line Gauthier!
Date: 5/28/2020 10:46:00 PM
I think this is brilliantly well thought and well penned out! "Resent not, for they appear To brighten up the path, to enlighten up the soul;" - let us remember this.
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Giti Tyagi
Date: 9/15/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Caren!
Date: 5/28/2020 4:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Sara
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Giti Tyagi
Date: 5/28/2020 10:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sara for your kind response and appreciation of my work!

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