Hunting Trip
We went walking
among the trees
in the sloping woods
where the chill wind
lost its way.
A search for fallen walnuts.
We shared one mitten,
and finger-danced
in that hiding place.
Other hunters
asked us
if we had found anything?”
Our eyes were secretly bright,
as we answered,
“Yes."
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
