Hunting Sevens

"Wondrous" this dynamic group,
That concocts their hearty poetic soup,
Then sit, then wait, always polite,
For comments that the others write.

But lofty are artistic goals,
As we bear our hearts and expose our souls,
And catapulted into heaven,
When we receive that cherished rate of "seven".

A "six" is like a pesky "B",
Like the one I got in chemistry,
Then pondered of my studious failing,
My heart and spirit, reeling, ailing.

Hunting sevens each new day,
New techniques, a different way.
Isn't life's adventure such,
We hunt our sevens way too much?

Comfort, silence, laying low,
I type this poem, a gift, although,
Should you love these words I write,
A seven will help me sleep tonight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mccoy Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 2:50 AM
I rate this poem a......s s si se si ......find out when we come back to.....seven!!!Thats my rating for a peom well done....CHEERS!!
Henderson Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Sean, you got my seven man. This is priceless. Going immediately to my favs. cgh
A   Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 12:28 AM
Sean... CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,.. Linda
White Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:56 PM
You are funny, and your poem. I am sure you will get your seven.
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sean
Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Sean. Love, Carol
Kotsybar Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Despite the blatant pandering, I gave it a seven.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Okay Sean, I wouldn't want to deprive you of a good nights sleep, so a seven it will be. Very clever and entertaining featured poem. Congratulations!
Adeite Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Big congrats on having your wonderful piece being featured this week. Keep writing as I wish you success with your writings. Stay great and have a wonderful weekend. Adeleke
Babcock Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week God Bless Phyl
Kelly Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Seven ; 7 ; VII ; Cleverly rhymed piece , Sean and well deserved front page placing . Have a good snore tonight !!!....
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Sean. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, sean
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Sean. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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