Notes About The Poem

Hunting season open

We're trying to be quiet.
This partridge in flight is surprisingly noisy.
Flutters grazing dad’s hunting hat.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Love it! I think I could read your haiku all day! Love it! But I too must write! Hugs, sweet Line!
Gauthier Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:59 AM
What a lovely thing to say, Kim. Most encouraging. Thank you so much. And yes, please do continue to write.
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