Hunting Season

Oh Deer

Look deer, a deal.
Steering wheel swerved.
My meal on wheels.

Deer-ly Departed

Hunter hunted.
See there’s Freddy -
stopped dead in tracks.

Just Look Up Fool

High beam dreamer.
Should occur to
him; heir on roof.

Hibernation Hideout

Bern let cub go.
Small bear-throw safe
in fro-zen sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Cool <3
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October 9, 2024 at 8:45 AM
Kim are Than_Bauks similar to Haikus.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Similar, I think. 3 lines, 4 syllables each, Normally rhyme on: line 1: 4th syllable, line 2: 3rd syll, line 3: 2nd syll… Alternately I like to use same sound on those syllables and some people have used no rhyming.
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Interesting form, nice.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Mike! :)
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