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Hunting Season

Oh Deer Look deer, a deal. Steering wheel swerved. My meal on wheels. Deer-ly Departed Hunter hunted. See there’s Freddy - stopped dead in tracks. Just Look Up Fool High beam dreamer. Should occur to him; heir on roof. Hibernation Hideout Bern let cub go. Small bear-throw safe in fro-zen sleep.

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Date: 10/10/2024 5:23:00 PM
Cool <3
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Date: 10/9/2024 8:45:00 AM
Kim are Than_Bauks similar to Haikus.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2024 9:32:00 AM
Similar, I think. 3 lines, 4 syllables each, Normally rhyme on: line 1: 4th syllable, line 2: 3rd syll, line 3: 2nd syll… Alternately I like to use same sound on those syllables and some people have used no rhyming.
Date: 10/9/2024 7:40:00 AM
Interesting form, nice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2024 8:40:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! :)

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