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Hunting Season

I smell a hunter Now my ears quickly perk up; Time to be careful.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/19/2008 8:53:00 PM

Daniel, I did not know animals Probably a deer writing Haiku Your FRIEND Raul told me about YOU and YOUR other FRIENDS and how YOU are reteaching the world the fine art of Japanese POETRY I was wondering DO YOU ABE, Steve, and Raul collaborate together It seems so YOUR Fellow Haikuer...HG

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/16/2008 5:27:00 PM

Deer are very sensitive animals and keenly aware of their surroundings.............Nice poem

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/30/2008 4:03:00 PM

Hunting season from the deers perspective. Great haiku. Thank you for your comment and welcome to PoetrySoup. Love Robin

Date: 11/30/2008 3:41:00 PM

So true. I'm sure the deer can attest to that. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/30/2008 2:15:00 PM

So do you like hunting? Great poem!! ^.^ Love Alexz P.S. You should read my poem My Friends At PoetrySoup ( I think that's what it's called) Maybe you could be one of those peolpe! :)

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/28/2008 12:39:00 PM

good poem do you hunt?

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/24/2008 4:23:00 PM

Love it! Awesome haiku! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/24/2008 3:17:00 PM

Nice haiku, welcome to poetry soup...Raul