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Hunting Season

I smell a hunter
Now my ears quickly perk up;
Time to be careful.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 19, 2008 at 8:53 PM

Daniel, I did not know animals Probably a deer writing Haiku Your FRIEND Raul told me about YOU and YOUR other FRIENDS and how YOU are reteaching the world the fine art of Japanese POETRY I was wondering DO YOU ABE, Steve, and Raul collaborate together It seems so YOUR Fellow Haikuer...HG

Abe Lopez

December 16, 2008 at 5:27 PM

Deer are very sensitive animals and keenly aware of their surroundings.............Nice poem

Robin L. Gass

November 30, 2008 at 4:03 PM

Hunting season from the deers perspective. Great haiku. Thank you for your comment and welcome to PoetrySoup. Love Robin

November 30, 2008 at 3:41 PM

So true. I'm sure the deer can attest to that. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Ali Matheny

November 30, 2008 at 2:15 PM

So do you like hunting? Great poem!! ^.^ Love Alexz P.S. You should read my poem My Friends At PoetrySoup ( I think that's what it's called) Maybe you could be one of those peolpe! :)