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Hunting Frog

Hunting Frog, late night Splash, a stream of piercing light bubbles from beneath I watch, amazed at the path they follow across the pond in a line explosive, the sound as the wet armadillo touches the still earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/30/2009 11:28:00 AM
thanks mr. fuller youve helped me get my life right so many times thank you
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Date: 4/27/2009 8:27:00 AM
Beautiful haiku.
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:04:00 AM
reminds me of the time I was night fishing and I was frightened by a beaver slapping its tail on the water. at first I had no idea what it was. we soon became friends that summer. this is a great write, loved the imagery!...very nice!
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Date: 4/21/2009 4:50:00 PM
Awesome Choka sequence. I've never seen an armadillo except on TV or at a zoo. Sounds like country fun! Good luck in the contest and thanks for your lovely and thoughtful comment on my blog. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:07:00 PM
I like your word pictures.
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest, I hope have a great day...Raul
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:20:00 AM
Nice choka, amazing imagery.
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