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Hungry Ted's

Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine Circling 'round high for their breakfast hor d'oeuvres Filling their cheeks while their baby ted's whine Mewing and Keowing for what mother serves Circling 'round high for their breakfast hor d'oeuvres Loner's afloat adrift on calm water Mewing and keowing for what mother serves Sitting on waves as they splash and swatter Loner's afloat adrift on calm water Dipping their heads as they eye for a snatch Sitting on waves as they splash and swatter keowing and mewing in hopes for a catch Dipping their heads as they eye for a snatch Filling their cheeks while their baby ted's whine Keowing and mewing in hopes for a catch Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine *1st Place Seagulls Poetry Contest Sponsor Eve Roper 11-26-2019

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/5/2020 11:58:00 AM

Nice Pantoum, I love them, but there is an art to them, the seagulls had me from beginning to end, nice write . . . : )

Na Na

Date: 12/20/2019 1:59:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Charles

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/1/2019 11:03:00 AM

Well done, good luck in the contest.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/1/2019 1:54:00 AM

Great descriptive piece a sure win in the contest! Good luck!;)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/30/2019 11:46:00 PM

Hello Charlie ... a good description of seagulls, and you have done a great job with repeating lines that fit each verse - thank you Charlie - Lindsay

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/27/2019 1:01:00 PM

wonderful imagery in this well penned pantoum Charlie... best wishes for a win... i love your original take on the theme...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2019 7:44:00 AM

- Woow ... very good, Charlie :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/26/2019 7:40:00 AM

Charles, you old dog you...fantastic pantoum my friend...it really is bro...and thank you for the most charming comments on my poems...your charm can't be beaten...now, if you were a woman, I would ask for your hand in marriage lol...and of course you would give me your fist, first lol...love ya bro...^WW^ :o)