Hungry Squirrels Hunt

hungry squirrels hunt
and smell a pile of acorns--
a growling dog springs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 19, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Good morning Jack, aweee.. poor dog... I mean squirrels.. o wait... I'm gonna give this a second,, view... the dog caused a boo boo... with the acorns. and got mad at the angry squirrel.. lol... luv~pd
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November 3, 2011 at 12:16 AM
This is pure action, Jack!! Squirrels can be aggressive if you approach their nests, wonder what happened to this doggie? ...Wonderful entry...can't wait to read the winners circle...and this scoring that Charles has planned...something new for the soup....ps..where are the photos of you in Halloween drag? lol....waiting.....waiting.......Gwendolen
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November 1, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Awesome description of an everyday event, Jack. I bet you saw something that gave you inspiration! Love, Carolyn
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November 1, 2011 at 9:25 PM
wow .. super picture painted in poetic words Jack..good luck if for the Haiku contest luv..
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November 1, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Good one Jack..I think you have the cut "thing" down pat..BG
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November 1, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Good one..Like the cut..Enjoyed reading..Winning material for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Chili on top of an upset stomach bad news...Sara
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November 1, 2011 at 3:03 PM
and scares the squirrels away. right?? very nice poem want to read more.
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