Hungry Hawk Hovers

Hungry hawk hovers...
The unaware hatchlings peep...
MPlaced 10th in The Natural Thing To Do contestassed small birds chase threat
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Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The natural Thing to Do". Love, Carol
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June 13, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Oh, I like the image you create with this one, JOyce. Nope, I don't waken to sunburns anymore. I exericse caution, but it did happen to me in my youth a few times! That snore thing has only happened twice thank heavens. haha. LUv, Andrea
Harrison Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Oh this is so vivid with the imagery. I love this haiku! Thanks for sharing.
Henderson Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest- Charles
Goff Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:28 PM
yes! saw many Hawks and Kestrels along the Mississippi River roads yest. out in the countryside...even saw a Vulture and 4-point Buck...mostly feasting on road-kill!!!(well, not the Buck! he was munchin' in an old cornfield!) GREAT POEM! Joyce! gemini jim
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