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Hungry Hawk Hovers

Hungry hawk hovers... The unaware hatchlings peep... MPlaced 10th in The Natural Thing To Do contestassed small birds chase threat

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/24/2010 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The natural Thing to Do". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 11:34:00 PM

Oh, I like the image you create with this one, JOyce. Nope, I don't waken to sunburns anymore. I exericse caution, but it did happen to me in my youth a few times! That snore thing has only happened twice thank heavens. haha. LUv, Andrea

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/13/2010 8:17:00 PM

Oh this is so vivid with the imagery. I love this haiku! Thanks for sharing.

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/13/2010 3:43:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest- Charles

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/13/2010 3:28:00 PM

yes! saw many Hawks and Kestrels along the Mississippi River roads yest. out in the countryside...even saw a Vulture and 4-point Buck...mostly feasting on road-kill!!!(well, not the Buck! he was munchin' in an old cornfield!) GREAT POEM! Joyce! gemini jim