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Hungers Scorn

I fold like a sheet of paper, I crumble in your embrace I tremble in your presence how time can not erase. You're my sense of being, the longing that I feel a hunger deep and seething of a need that is surreal. Every ache is painful, how could you even doubt without you, it hurts me inside I scream and shout. A line of desperation, a plea upon my lips rants of a woman mad I drink you sip by sip. Will you let me hold you, calm this ache in me the hungry raging monster that wants to be set free?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/5/2019 1:49:00 PM
This is intense!!! I get a vibe of strong love involved within this poem. I like the line “I fold like a sheet of paper.” It’s simple but it has a beautiful imagery to it once you think deeply about it.
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 11/30/2019 1:41:00 PM
Hi there Pace, Really nice to see your kind words . I am very happy you enjoyed this piece. Take care and have a wonderful Thanksgiving weekend. jess

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