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Hunger pangs

Hunger juices Living to eat or eating to live, Hobby, habit or need ? Money matters or personal, While rich were obese, Poor kids anorexic. Royal cheese and creamy daal, Tandoor is red hot, Crisp chapatis and pickle, Saliva fills mouth, Nasal buds get taste, Delicious, Wow ! Dream shatters as eyes open, Saliva drools into the eyes, The kids sleep in hunger again ! Written July 20th, 2015 For Debbie's contest Second verse is an epulaeryu.....

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Date: 7/20/2015 11:30:00 AM
Your words of superb imagery gently take the reader to a private place in your heart and we feel welcome. Emile.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 12:48:00 AM
Thnx Emile!
Date: 7/20/2015 11:11:00 AM
Very clever write Dr Sharma I love comparisions in the first stanza and the way you included the epuleryu as part of the poem too:-) Hugs jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thnx for ur ever kind visits n words dear Jan!