Hunger Pains

These hunger pains are trying to kill me.
I digested happiness long ago,
However, that substance did not fill me,
Lining my disappointments in a row.
Loneliness, an unsatisfying snack,
Burns the heart, therefore adding to the pain.
Acid reflux pushing words of hope back,
Regurgitated with nothing to gain.
Whenever I try to take a deep breath,
The air escapes through the hole in my gut.
Thus, proving that if I try to beat death,
I will never succeed no matter what.
       This is the condition that I live in,
       Forced to consume what I have been given.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 16, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Brutally vivid; I like how you've taken what is traditionally a form to describe beauty and turned it into a way to present images of despair and pain. Great write.
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