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Hunger and Taste

Nature's curse, putting the whole to sober but when over-stretched, can sting like rubber comfort and strength all in a bad set the body's freedom, limited by an inner corset a corrosive inside in need of the next butter physiological redemption coming through water instinctive drive to swallow the sea any coloured liquid, tantalizing as tea an inevitable cycle to constantly stay fresh preserving the functionality of a dying flesh

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Date: 2/11/2016 10:04:00 AM
A great, grim look at hunger.. "instinctive drive to swallow the sea any coloured liquid, tantalizing as tea" How the mind does play tricks! Very well written.
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:52:00 AM
Impressive display of mastery both in analogy and language. Keep up with your excellent writing, Funom.
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:28:00 PM
Hi Funom, an excellent write my friend. Your poems hold deep meaning as your words flow so easily into the mind painting the canvas. The pictures come before us as we read, whether they be sad or happy they are always painted so well. A seven and a fave for this piece my friend....Vladislav.
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