Hung Up on You!

I was hung up on you, oh that's true,
But not in the way you knew.
I swiped off the line,
While you were saying you're mine 
I just done - Hung up on You!
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Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 11:53 AM
The last line is a real kicker, John
Anderson Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 12:43 PM
Yeah a twist! Thanks and Cheers
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