Humpity-Dumpity, Diddily-Do Nursery Rhyme

Humpity, Dumpity, Diddily-Do 
I love you and you love me, too. 
 
Humpity, Dumpity, Diddily-Do 
Sweet little [baby]* with eyes of blue. 

Humpity, Dumpity, Diddily-Do 
[Papa]* sings a lullaby for you. 

Humpity, Dumpity, Diddily-Do 
I love you and you love me, true 
Humpity, Dumpity, Diddily-Do. 


[*can substitute “boy” or “girl”; 
 substitute “Mama” or “Grandma”] 

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written March 22, 2021 
For “Nursery Rhyme 3” Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Eve Roper

[Published in Nursery Rhymes & Stories From Poets Around the World, Eve Roper, Editor, Kindle Direct Publishing, 2021]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM
This is truly adorable Milton, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. It was fun to write, too.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:13 PM
- Well deserved ... congratulations, Milton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Thanks so much, Sunshine. It's a perfect one, if you ask me. I appreciate your encouragement.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:40 PM
That is simply gorgeous L, I love it... Congratulations on a well dressed win ~ Belle
Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, Belle. Feel free to use it anytime you like! Thanks for the read.
Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:51 AM
A great nursery rhyme with all the repetition. Congrats on your 1st place win, Milton! Blessings, Kim M
Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, Kim. I gave it my best shot....
Flood Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:32 AM
Congrats on this win. Have to say I’m glad it wasnt, Piddley Poo! ;-) Terry
Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Hmmm...that never crossed my mind. Maybe next time. LOL.
Y. Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Hi L. Milton, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a good evening:-)Alexis
Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much, Alexis. I sure appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:10 PM
Milton, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Thanks, Eve. I'll keep trying. I have this aspiration to be at the top! Your encouragement is so helpful!
Debole Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 4:17 AM
So sweet! Love the spin-off of Humpty Dumpty...
Hankins Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Thanks, Gail. It is easy to memorize, which makes it a good one. Little kids love this repetition.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:08 AM
Ah, so much fun! Love the prancy, dancy, fancy feel of it. This is TERRIFIC!
Hankins Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:43 AM
LOL. Well, it just popped into my head. I think I sang something like this to my babies a long, long time ago.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 11:44 AM
One of my favourites that I have read for the contest. Best of luck to you. ;0)
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thanks, Richard. I think I sung something like this to my babies a long time ago! Thanks for the read and your encouraging comment.
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Hi L. Milton, You penned a good “ nursery rhyme” poem for the contest. I would read something like this to my little ones. It is so fitting for the age group. So fitting for the age group. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 10:19 AM
You are most welcome. My kids are too big. Maybe I could read it to my little nephew:-)Alexis
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Alexis, thanks for the encouragement. You have my permission to use it anytime. It is so easy to remember. You have a great day, too.
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 8:38 AM
- I love the sound of this cute nursery rhyme, Milton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Diddily-Do // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Thanks so much, Sunshine.
Ball Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Excellent Milton. Love it. Hope it winds. I could see a loving parent singing this to a baby in his/her crib at bedtime. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thanks, JB. I appreciate your read and your good wishes!
Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:36 PM
L Milton, your nursery rhyme is so pleasing to the ear, and is catchy and fun for small children, who'll be repeating it in no time. Best of luck in the contest. :D
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Thanks, Evelyn. I think those qualities are especially important for verses used with little children. Somehow they seem to relate to nonsense sounds, and they learn from them. Thanks so much for your read, Evelyn.
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March 22, 2021 at 6:36 PM
L, that’s beautiful, if it was written for your own Humpity-Dumpity, Diddily-Do, then I’m sure he or she loved it too. Belle
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Thanks, Belle. I'm sure I sang some similar ditties to my babies when they were little. I enjoyed this one, and I think it will work well in the contest. Thanks again.
Laurie Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Hello Milton … a nice little couplet on a popular nursery rhyme. Great for kids to learn Milton - Lindsay
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Thanks, Lindsay. It was a fun write!
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March 22, 2021 at 10:27 AM
I bet children love listening to your nursery rhymes, Milton. This one is so cute! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, carolyn
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. I think I sang something like this to my children when they were babies. We'll see how it goes. With Lulu all grown up, wasn't much there of interest anymore. I hope you'll enter the contest.
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