Hummingbirds

Hovering the plants,
With wings beating rapidly;
Searching for nectar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:16 AM
My favorite bird. Lovely tribute with your beautiful choka, Daniel. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
Orozco Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Lovely piece indeed- jeremiah
Winter Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 3:12 PM
The real prize is your poem. Hummingbirds are so enchanting. You've done them great justice here. Wonderful. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful choka, love the way you described it search for food...Raul
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