Tania Kitchin Poet Rhyme

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Hummingbirds

Waiting to see my ruby delights
Magical hummers buzzing in flight
Tiny feathers glisten in sunlight
Sparkle like gems of emeralds and rubies
Beautiful creatures fast and sprite

Zooming and buzzing sounds 
Searching for nectar, whispers of songs
I have no doubt, it won’t be long
Before they feel the pull
Of flowers in bloom and feeders full

One has landed, but only for a moment
Staring out my window, what a sight
I am seduced, vibrant hues so potent
Until next time, I will be
Waiting to see my ruby delights
Magical hummers buzzing in flight

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CayCay Godwin March 29, 2025 at 2:18 PM I so enjoyed reading your poems that I decided to visit your beginning (I happen to have been blessed with LOTS of free time today.) You are so cute, I smile at your response to comments, 'thank you, ****', thank you ****, so unique. I have never been able to adequately sum up how watching hummingbirds affects me and why, so I loved you clarifying it for me in this well-written gifting-explanation ... CayCay Tania Kitchin March 29, 2025 at 2:49 PM CayCay, thank you and thanks for visiting my page and taking the time to read some of my earlier poems.

Mark Toney March 8, 2025 at 10:38 PM Tania, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Callenge (11). We love hummingbirds! Evidently you do too. A Fav for me. :) Tania Kitchin March 9, 2025 at 3:44 AM Mark, thank you.

Richard Lamoureux May 19, 2019 at 9:15 AM My pleasure.

Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2019 at 8:04 AM I see your first poem is a winner, a great way to introduce yourself to the soup. Thanks for your visit this morning. Tania Kitchin April 14, 2019 at 8:33 AM Thank you and thanks for stopping by!

Constance La France July 29, 2018 at 5:16 PM Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, well done ! Tania Kitchin July 29, 2018 at 5:36 PM thank you so much!

Susan Gentry July 28, 2018 at 2:04 PM Congratulations on your win. One of the best hummingbird poems I've read (including my own lol). Enjoyed. Tania Kitchin July 28, 2018 at 2:27 PM Thank you Susan!

Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 5:20 PM Congratulations on your awesome win, Tania , Hummingbirds are a beautiful magical tiny bird to watch. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve Tania Kitchin July 27, 2018 at 5:50 PM thank you Eve and thanks for stopping by!

Frederic Parker July 2, 2018 at 4:53 PM I have written poetic lines filled with hummingbirds and really like yours...an interesting first poem on poetry soup...welcome dear poet Tania Kitchin July 2, 2018 at 5:21 PM thank you

Silent One June 19, 2018 at 8:33 AM I love hummingbirds... great first post.. Welcome to soup.. Tania Kitchin June 19, 2018 at 11:02 AM Thank you, I love hummingbirds too.