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waiting to see my ruby delights
magical hummers buzzing in flight
tiny feathers glisten in sunlight
sparkle like gems of emeralds and rubies
beautiful creatures fast and sprite

zooming and buzzing sounds 
searching for nectar, whispers of songs
I have no doubt, it won’t be long
before they feel the pull
of flowers in bloom and feeders full

one has landed, but only for a moment
staring out my window, what a sight
I am seduced, vibrant hues so potent
until next time, I will be
waiting to see my ruby delights
magical hummers buzzing in flight



Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/29/2018 5:16:00 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, well done !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/29/2018 5:36:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 7/28/2018 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. One of the best hummingbird poems I've read (including my own lol). Enjoyed.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 7/27/2018 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Tania , Hummingbirds are a beautiful magical tiny bird to watch. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/27/2018 5:50:00 PM
thank you Eve and thanks for stopping by!
Date: 7/2/2018 4:53:00 PM
I have written poetic lines filled with hummingbirds and really like yours...an interesting first poem on poetry soup...welcome dear poet
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/2/2018 5:21:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/19/2018 8:33:00 AM
I love hummingbirds... great first post.. Welcome to soup..
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, I love hummingbirds too.