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Waiting to see my ruby delights Magical hummers buzzing in flight Tiny feathers glisten in sunlight Sparkle like gems of emeralds and rubies Beautiful creatures fast and sprite Zooming and buzzing sounds Searching for nectar, whispers of songs I have no doubt, it won’t be long Before they feel the pull Of flowers in bloom and feeders full One has landed, but only for a moment Staring out my window, what a sight I am seduced, vibrant hues so potent Until next time, I will be Waiting to see my ruby delights Magical hummers buzzing in flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/19/2019 9:15:00 AM
My pleasure.
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Date: 4/14/2019 8:04:00 AM
I see your first poem is a winner, a great way to introduce yourself to the soup. Thanks for your visit this morning.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/14/2019 8:33:00 AM
Thank you and thanks for stopping by!
Date: 7/29/2018 5:16:00 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, well done !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/29/2018 5:36:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 7/28/2018 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. One of the best hummingbird poems I've read (including my own lol). Enjoyed.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 7/27/2018 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Tania , Hummingbirds are a beautiful magical tiny bird to watch. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/27/2018 5:50:00 PM
thank you Eve and thanks for stopping by!
Date: 7/2/2018 4:53:00 PM
I have written poetic lines filled with hummingbirds and really like yours...an interesting first poem on poetry soup...welcome dear poet
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/2/2018 5:21:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/19/2018 8:33:00 AM
I love hummingbirds... great first post.. Welcome to soup..
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, I love hummingbirds too.

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