Hummingbird Cake

I came upon a recipe
That wasn’t a mistake,
Though it was for something strangely called
A hummingbird (huh?) cake.

I glanced at the ingredients – 
The list was far from brief
But there weren’t any hummingbirds,
Which was a huge relief.

With pineapple, bananas,
Sugar, cinnamon and flour,
Eggs, vanilla, oil and pecans
It sounds great, but gets its power

From its cream cheese butter frosting,
Which must add the perfect touch
To a sweet dessert that many people
Must like very much.

The cake is from Jamaica
So its name, from what I’ve heard,
Is a tribute to, you might have guessed,
The nation’s namesake bird.

Maybe someday I will try it,
But I know when that day comes,
I’ll be grateful knowing there was no 
Ingredient that hums!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Terry Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Another fun, clever poem. You are a master of this style. I thoroughly enjoy them all. A rhyming delight, Ilene.
Bauer Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 1:12 PM
thank you so much for that lovely comment, jan!
Greenhough Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 6:50 PM
I learned a lot from your wonderful poem. I have never eaten this cake. Thanks for a delicious dessert poem.
Bauer Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 1:12 PM
much appreciated, hilda!
Rolland Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 3:31 PM
it seems delicious, so original, will seek the recipe, so lovely is your poem
Bauer Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 1:13 PM
thank you, yann! let me know if you actually bake it. i've never tried it either...
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