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Hummingbird August

in bounteous blooms
where rapture and beauty meet
in green parkland days

a colorful blur
gone past the edge of my sight
sweet humming I hear

but mellow sunshine
seems to overpower all
in the time of birds
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Shaw Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Amazing birds in design, lucky you to be able to see them and hear them, and then summarise them in these beautiful Haiku's, lovely . . . : )
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Indiana. I am so happy you liked this poem. Have a nice evening, my friend. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 11:01 AM
Hello Evelyn Buehler, they are small bids, they fly quickly. They are my favourite birds. Blessings Darlene. Enjoy your day.
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Hello Darlene, I am sorry for the tardiness of my reply. I just saw this. To answer your question, I have copied and pasted the answer from the internet: Brightly-colored flowers that are tubular hold the most nectar, and are particularly attractive to hummingbirds. These include perennials such as bee balms, columbines, daylilies, and lupines; biennials such as foxgloves and hollyhocks; and many annuals, including cleomes, impatiens, and petunias. Have a nice evening! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Hello Evelyn, what type of flower attracts the Humming birds? You are so welcome. enjoy your day my friend. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 2:38 PM
They are so beautiful and delightful to watch. Thank you very much for your inspiring words. Blessings. :)
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Wonderfully descriptive! For sure, mellow sunshine does seem to overpower all. For all nature blends harmoniously in pure light. Great writing.
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much for the sunny thoughts, Joe. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Especially the first stanza!
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Thank you, Kim. :)
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