Hummingbird

Heart of an Eagle
With a bloom tickling tongue
Hummingbird in flight




entry;  Paul Moreno's contest
              "Daily Ritual"
No placement
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Parrish-Spence Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 4:44 PM
This is very cute. I like it. Thanks
Murphy Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:27 PM
very nice good luck in the contest well done faleshia
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Oh, I love that first line!! Sweetly done !! :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace