Thomas Wells Poet Haiku

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Hummingbird

                                       
                                       Hummingbird  hovers,

                                      sailing  nectar assailant.

                                      He floats, feather-hum.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers January 12, 2024 at 9:11 AM Hello Thomas, congrats on poem being highlighted. I love this Haiku about hummingbirds! Both are fans of mine. - Blessings. Daniel! Thomas Wells January 30, 2024 at 11:54 AM Thank you, Daniel! It appears we have something in common. I share your love of hummingbirds and haiku. Be well, always! :-)

Brian Sambourne January 12, 2024 at 7:02 AM So well penned, Thomas. Your concluding line is a zinger - poetic power at its best. Hummingbird flight conveyed to a T. Be well. Brian Thomas Wells January 30, 2024 at 11:50 AM Hello, Brian. Thank you for your praise. I remember watching the hummingbirds of my childhood as they hovered close to the holly trees and picked over the berries. Be well, always. - Thomas :-)

Anil Deo May 10, 2020 at 1:39 PM captured its movement brilliantly. Thanx Thomas, anil (PAZ & shalom shalOM or maybe ... SHALLaum)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 7, 2020 at 5:30 PM Hello Thomas Wells I love the Humming bird. They are so tiny and fly backwards.A beautiful bird. Enjoy your evening my firend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 8, 2020 at 12:30 PM Hello Tom Wells, you are lucky to have these birds. The berries from the Holly tree must be their favourite food. Enjoy your day my friend. Thomas Wells May 7, 2020 at 8:34 PM Hi Darlene, Yes they have remarkable abilities. I remember as child how they would glide around next to our Holly Trees and pick at the red berries. Stay happy and safe!