Trudy Diane Rider Poet Concrete

Hummers Joy

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                                                   Tiny
	                                          Little
                             Hummingbird, O how
                                                   You
                                               With your 
                                              Emerald wings
	                                 Inspire the imagination
	                                Set our minds free, And give us wings
                                      As we flit and dart through pine scented sunshine
			              Gathering dreams, singing a new song
		                      As troubles melt away
		    	              And the joy of living
				      Returns  to us
					 With every
						Heart
	                                           beat
						         A
						         New
						             World
  							  Unfolds to
							    Embrace us
							        With love
							               And
								         Joy

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Balveen Cheema June 27, 2016 at 1:51 AM Very creative in this concrete form Trudy! A beautiful hummingbird flittingthrough pine scented sunshine! A 7!

Rainbow Promise June 19, 2016 at 9:32 PM Darting from flower to flower in reality, as this shape darts to poetic hearts. It required time and patience to form this intricate shape. Congratulations on your win Trudy. Hugs, RP. Trudy Diane Rider June 19, 2016 at 10:30 PM It was a real joy to create this one. Thank you RP.

Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 7:22 AM What an incredible shape poem - I have never seen a hummingbird in real life would love to one day:-) hugs Jan xx Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:52 PM I do hope you get to see one in real life someday, they are one God's most amazing and beautiful little creatures! Thank you for commenting on this poem as well! ~Trudy~

Debbie Duncan June 16, 2016 at 1:41 AM This is very nice :) Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:51 PM Thank you Debbie!

Probir Gupta June 15, 2016 at 9:58 PM A feel of freedom while I read the poem .... a sense of beauty as I see it ... Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:50 PM Thank you Probir!

Arthur Weil June 15, 2016 at 5:30 PM Beautiful poem with a shape just like a darting hummingbird. Makes me want to see a hummingbird right now Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:49 PM Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment on my poem Arthur. It means a lot that you enjoyed it so. ~Trudy~

Matthew Anish June 15, 2016 at 3:57 PM This is a lovely "shape" poem tribute to a wonderful creature! Congratulations on having your poems featured. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:48 PM Thank you for taking the time to read my featured poems and to comment. It means a lot to me. ~Trudy~

Bl Devnath June 15, 2016 at 2:19 PM beautiful poem read from you my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always. bl Trudy Diane Rider June 16, 2016 at 3:46 PM Thank you very much BL. ~Trudy~

James Inman June 15, 2016 at 12:49 PM A lovely shaped poem, lovely. Trudy Diane Rider June 15, 2016 at 12:51 PM Thank you very much James!

Jesse Day June 15, 2016 at 12:17 PM New lifetime member! Beautiful poem and fun to read - picturesque! Trudy Diane Rider June 15, 2016 at 12:50 PM Thank you Jesse!

Trudy Diane Rider June 10, 2016 at 9:21 PM I'm good, alive, here and back again. Thanks for checking on me! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 6:04 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song July 30, 2012 at 10:34 AM I luv hummingbirds & I luv this Poem! Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2012 at 10:29 PM TRUDY. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD

Kim Merryman July 29, 2012 at 5:19 PM I love this! An excellent write and creative shape. Congrats on your 1st place win! I adore hummingbirds and I'm placing this in my favs. Love, KIm

Debbie Guzzi July 29, 2012 at 3:30 PM A fine brave write with such a hard shape to make! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards July 29, 2012 at 2:41 PM Such art in both words and scope....a beauty!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 29, 2012 at 2:21 PM Congrats, Trudy, on your wonderful win! I love the shape! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 29, 2012 at 1:10 PM Congratulations Trudy great shape xx

Sara Kendrick July 29, 2012 at 1:03 PM Congrats on your creative win..Sara

Caryl Muzzey July 29, 2012 at 12:39 PM Congratulations Trudy, on your 1st win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

David Williams July 29, 2012 at 12:12 PM Trudy congrats on your win, fabulous poem and shape...David

Debbie Guzzi October 21, 2009 at 2:35 PM You go Gal! Nice birdie above too! Thanks for your support! Light & Love

September 3, 2009 at 1:30 PM Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest. Just wanted to drop by and add that to my other comment. Love the creativity of this piece. I knew it was a winner the first time I saw it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Dedy Riyadi August 24, 2009 at 7:03 PM cool!

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