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Hummers Joy

.
                                                   Tiny
	                                          Little
                             Hummingbird, O how
                                                   You
                                               With your 
                                              Emerald wings
	                                 Inspire the imagination
	                                Set our minds free, And give us wings
                                      As we flit and dart through pine scented sunshine
			              Gathering dreams, singing a new song
		                      As troubles melt away
		    	              And the joy of living
				      Returns  to us
					 With every
						Heart
	                                           beat
						         A
						         New
						             World
  							  Unfolds to
							    Embrace us
							        With love
							               And
								         Joy

Copyright © Trudy Diane Rider | Year Posted 2009

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Balveen Cheema Date: 6/27/2016 1:51:00 AM Very creative in this concrete form Trudy! A beautiful hummingbird flittingthrough pine scented sunshine! A 7! Login to Reply

Rainbow Promise Date: 6/19/2016 9:32:00 PM Darting from flower to flower in reality, as this shape darts to poetic hearts. It required time and patience to form this intricate shape. Congratulations on your win Trudy. Hugs, RP. Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/19/2016 10:30:00 PM It was a real joy to create this one. Thank you RP.

Jan Allison Date: 6/16/2016 7:22:00 AM What an incredible shape poem - I have never seen a hummingbird in real life would love to one day:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:52:00 PM I do hope you get to see one in real life someday, they are one God's most amazing and beautiful little creatures! Thank you for commenting on this poem as well! ~Trudy~

Debbie Duncan Date: 6/16/2016 1:41:00 AM This is very nice :) Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:51:00 PM Thank you Debbie!

Probir Gupta Date: 6/15/2016 9:58:00 PM A feel of freedom while I read the poem .... a sense of beauty as I see it ... Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:50:00 PM Thank you Probir!

Arthur Weil Date: 6/15/2016 5:30:00 PM Beautiful poem with a shape just like a darting hummingbird. Makes me want to see a hummingbird right now Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:49:00 PM Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment on my poem Arthur. It means a lot that you enjoyed it so. ~Trudy~

Matthew Anish Date: 6/15/2016 3:57:00 PM This is a lovely "shape" poem tribute to a wonderful creature! Congratulations on having your poems featured. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:48:00 PM Thank you for taking the time to read my featured poems and to comment. It means a lot to me. ~Trudy~

Bl Devnath Date: 6/15/2016 2:19:00 PM beautiful poem read from you my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always. bl Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/16/2016 3:46:00 PM Thank you very much BL. ~Trudy~

James Inman Date: 6/15/2016 12:49:00 PM A lovely shaped poem, lovely. Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/15/2016 12:51:00 PM Thank you very much James!

Jesse Day Date: 6/15/2016 12:17:00 PM New lifetime member! Beautiful poem and fun to read - picturesque! Login to Reply Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/15/2016 12:50:00 PM Thank you Jesse!

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 6/10/2016 9:21:00 PM I'm good, alive, here and back again. Thanks for checking on me! ~Trudy~ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/1/2012 6:04:00 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Trudy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 7/30/2012 10:34:00 AM I luv hummingbirds & I luv this Poem! Congrats! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/29/2012 10:29:00 PM TRUDY. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 7/29/2012 5:19:00 PM I love this! An excellent write and creative shape. Congrats on your 1st place win! I adore hummingbirds and I'm placing this in my favs. Love, KIm Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/29/2012 3:30:00 PM A fine brave write with such a hard shape to make! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/29/2012 2:41:00 PM Such art in both words and scope....a beauty! Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 7/29/2012 2:21:00 PM Congrats, Trudy, on your wonderful win! I love the shape! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 7/29/2012 1:10:00 PM Congratulations Trudy great shape xx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/29/2012 1:03:00 PM Congrats on your creative win..Sara Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 7/29/2012 12:39:00 PM Congratulations Trudy, on your 1st win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/29/2012 12:12:00 PM Trudy congrats on your win, fabulous poem and shape...David Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/21/2009 2:35:00 PM You go Gal! Nice birdie above too! Thanks for your support! Light & Love Login to Reply

Date: 9/3/2009 1:30:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest. Just wanted to drop by and add that to my other comment. Love the creativity of this piece. I knew it was a winner the first time I saw it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!! Karen Login to Reply

Dedy Riyadi Date: 8/24/2009 7:03:00 PM cool! Login to Reply

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