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Hummers Joy

. Tiny Little Hummingbird, O how You With your Emerald wings Inspire the imagination Set our minds free, And give us wings As we flit and dart through pine scented sunshine Gathering dreams, singing a new song As troubles melt away And the joy of living Returns to us With every Heart beat A New World Unfolds to Embrace us With love And Joy

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Balveen Cheema

Date: 6/27/2016 1:51:00 AM

Very creative in this concrete form Trudy! A beautiful hummingbird flittingthrough pine scented sunshine! A 7!

Rainbow Promise

Date: 6/19/2016 9:32:00 PM

Darting from flower to flower in reality, as this shape darts to poetic hearts. It required time and patience to form this intricate shape. Congratulations on your win Trudy. Hugs, RP.

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/19/2016 10:30:00 PM

It was a real joy to create this one. Thank you RP.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/16/2016 7:22:00 AM

What an incredible shape poem - I have never seen a hummingbird in real life would love to one day:-) hugs Jan xx

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:52:00 PM

I do hope you get to see one in real life someday, they are one God's most amazing and beautiful little creatures! Thank you for commenting on this poem as well! ~Trudy~

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/16/2016 1:41:00 AM

This is very nice :)

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Debbie!

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/15/2016 9:58:00 PM

A feel of freedom while I read the poem .... a sense of beauty as I see it ...

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:50:00 PM

Thank you Probir!

Arthur Weil

Date: 6/15/2016 5:30:00 PM

Beautiful poem with a shape just like a darting hummingbird. Makes me want to see a hummingbird right now

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:49:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment on my poem Arthur. It means a lot that you enjoyed it so. ~Trudy~

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/15/2016 3:57:00 PM

This is a lovely "shape" poem tribute to a wonderful creature! Congratulations on having your poems featured. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:48:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read my featured poems and to comment. It means a lot to me. ~Trudy~

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/15/2016 2:19:00 PM

beautiful poem read from you my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always. bl

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:46:00 PM

Thank you very much BL. ~Trudy~

James Inman

Date: 6/15/2016 12:49:00 PM

A lovely shaped poem, lovely.

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 12:51:00 PM

Thank you very much James!

Jesse Day

Date: 6/15/2016 12:17:00 PM

New lifetime member! Beautiful poem and fun to read - picturesque!

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 12:50:00 PM

Thank you Jesse!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/10/2016 9:21:00 PM

I'm good, alive, here and back again. Thanks for checking on me! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/30/2012 10:34:00 AM

I luv hummingbirds & I luv this Poem! Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2012 10:29:00 PM

TRUDY. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/29/2012 5:19:00 PM

I love this! An excellent write and creative shape. Congrats on your 1st place win! I adore hummingbirds and I'm placing this in my favs. Love, KIm

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/29/2012 3:30:00 PM

A fine brave write with such a hard shape to make! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/29/2012 2:41:00 PM

Such art in both words and scope....a beauty!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/29/2012 2:21:00 PM

Congrats, Trudy, on your wonderful win! I love the shape! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/29/2012 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations Trudy great shape xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2012 1:03:00 PM

Congrats on your creative win..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/29/2012 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations Trudy, on your 1st win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

David Williams

Date: 7/29/2012 12:12:00 PM

Trudy congrats on your win, fabulous poem and shape...David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/21/2009 2:35:00 PM

You go Gal! Nice birdie above too! Thanks for your support! Light & Love

Date: 9/3/2009 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest. Just wanted to drop by and add that to my other comment. Love the creativity of this piece. I knew it was a winner the first time I saw it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Dedy Riyadi

Date: 8/24/2009 7:03:00 PM

cool!