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Hummers Joy

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                                                   Tiny
	                                          Little
                             Hummingbird, O how
                                                   You
                                               With your 
                                              Emerald wings
	                                 Inspire the imagination
	                                Set our minds free, And give us wings
                                      As we flit and dart through pine scented sunshine
			              Gathering dreams, singing a new song
		                      As troubles melt away
		    	              And the joy of living
				      Returns  to us
					 With every
						Heart
	                                           beat
						         A
						         New
						             World
  							  Unfolds to
							    Embrace us
							        With love
							               And
								         Joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2016 1:51:00 AM
Very creative in this concrete form Trudy! A beautiful hummingbird flittingthrough pine scented sunshine! A 7!
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Date: 6/19/2016 9:32:00 PM
Darting from flower to flower in reality, as this shape darts to poetic hearts. It required time and patience to form this intricate shape. Congratulations on your win Trudy. Hugs, RP.
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/19/2016 10:30:00 PM
It was a real joy to create this one. Thank you RP.
Date: 6/16/2016 7:22:00 AM
What an incredible shape poem - I have never seen a hummingbird in real life would love to one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:52:00 PM
I do hope you get to see one in real life someday, they are one God's most amazing and beautiful little creatures! Thank you for commenting on this poem as well! ~Trudy~
Date: 6/16/2016 1:41:00 AM
This is very nice :)
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Debbie!
Date: 6/15/2016 9:58:00 PM
A feel of freedom while I read the poem .... a sense of beauty as I see it ...
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 6/15/2016 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem with a shape just like a darting hummingbird. Makes me want to see a hummingbird right now
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and to comment on my poem Arthur. It means a lot that you enjoyed it so. ~Trudy~
Date: 6/15/2016 3:57:00 PM
This is a lovely "shape" poem tribute to a wonderful creature! Congratulations on having your poems featured. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my featured poems and to comment. It means a lot to me. ~Trudy~
Date: 6/15/2016 2:19:00 PM
beautiful poem read from you my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always. bl
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/16/2016 3:46:00 PM
Thank you very much BL. ~Trudy~
Date: 6/15/2016 12:49:00 PM
A lovely shaped poem, lovely.
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you very much James!
Date: 6/15/2016 12:17:00 PM
New lifetime member! Beautiful poem and fun to read - picturesque!
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Jesse!
Date: 6/10/2016 9:21:00 PM
I'm good, alive, here and back again. Thanks for checking on me! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/1/2012 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2012 10:34:00 AM
I luv hummingbirds & I luv this Poem! Congrats!
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:29:00 PM
TRUDY. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:19:00 PM
I love this! An excellent write and creative shape. Congrats on your 1st place win! I adore hummingbirds and I'm placing this in my favs. Love, KIm
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Date: 7/29/2012 3:30:00 PM
A fine brave write with such a hard shape to make! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:41:00 PM
Such art in both words and scope....a beauty!
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:21:00 PM
Congrats, Trudy, on your wonderful win! I love the shape! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations Trudy great shape xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:03:00 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations Trudy, on your 1st win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:12:00 PM
Trudy congrats on your win, fabulous poem and shape...David
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:35:00 PM
You go Gal! Nice birdie above too! Thanks for your support! Light & Love
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Date: 9/3/2009 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest. Just wanted to drop by and add that to my other comment. Love the creativity of this piece. I knew it was a winner the first time I saw it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:03:00 PM
cool!
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