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Hummer' and Hibiscus

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Poetry/Rhyme/Trilonnet/Hummer' and Hibiscus(Image chosen #3)
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-314-01
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 01, 2023
For the Standard contest, Trilonnet
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 06/25/2023

First Place

Hibiscus for a sweet hummer', with feathers so iridescent; oh, dip your long beak in nectar ! Flutter my little incomer, I love your green blue pearlescent; oh, lovely flower inspector ! Blooming just for you all summer, tail a purple incandescent; sweet bloom for a sweet collector ! Delightful little mime mummer, look like you could be fluorescent; and blessed with a sweet detector ! Among my flowers shimmering; spinning, flitting, and glimmering !

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Joseph May
Date: 6/25/2023 4:59:00 PM
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Beautiful write Constance, Congrats on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:14:00 AM
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Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and for my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats !
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Date: 6/1/2023 9:19:00 PM
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Oh wow! Almost impossible to beat! Fabulous!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:48:00 PM
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Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment !

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