Hummer' and Hibiscus
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Poetry/Rhyme/Trilonnet/Hummer' and Hibiscus(Image chosen #3)
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-314-01
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
Written June 01, 2023
For the Standard contest, Trilonnet
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 06/25/2023
First Place
Hibiscus for a sweet hummer',
with feathers so iridescent;
oh, dip your long beak in nectar !
Flutter my little incomer,
I love your green blue pearlescent;
oh, lovely flower inspector !
Blooming just for you all summer,
tail a purple incandescent;
sweet bloom for a sweet collector !
Delightful little mime mummer,
look like you could be fluorescent;
and blessed with a sweet detector !
Among my flowers shimmering;
spinning, flitting, and glimmering !
Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2023
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