Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Trilonnet/Hummer' and Hibiscus(Image chosen #3)
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-314-01
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 01, 2023
For the Standard contest, Trilonnet
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 06/25/2023

First Place

Hummer' and Hibiscus

 

Hibiscus for a sweet hummer',
with feathers so iridescent;
oh, dip your long beak in nectar !

Flutter my little incomer,
I love your green blue pearlescent;
oh, lovely flower inspector !

Blooming just for you all summer,
tail a purple incandescent;
sweet bloom for a sweet collector !

Delightful little mime mummer,
look like you could be fluorescent;
and blessed with a sweet detector !

Among my flowers shimmering;
spinning, flitting, and glimmering !

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Joseph May June 25, 2023 at 4:59 PM Beautiful write Constance, Congrats on your win Constance La France June 26, 2023 at 8:14 AM Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and for my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats !

Unseeking Seeker June 1, 2023 at 9:19 PM Oh wow! Almost impossible to beat! Fabulous! Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 3:48 PM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment !