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HUMILITY FOUND

HUMILITY FOUND ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When ego's fragile form begins to fade, a limitless expanse of soul appears. The boundaries that once bound and confined, now stretch, expand, transform, and astound. In losing the ego self, another universe is found, a world of wonder, limitless, and esoteric. The chains of comparison are severed; they no longer bind, no longer suffocate either you or me. The prison of competition is left behind, unfettered, enlightenment grows. In this vast and open place, humility also grows, and a web of love and Divine interconnectedness prevail.
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Legros Kelley Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 12:40 AM
A beautifully penned work of honesty, and hope, Sara. Very lovely <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 2:56 PM
lovely message well elaborated ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:04 PM
many thanks, Line
Goldsmith Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 10:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "HUMILITY FOUND" write with a great picture. Have a wonderful day writing away............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:03 PM
thank you, Paula, for consistently reading my poems and commenting. You're special, hugs Sara
Rolland Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 10:52 PM
enjoyed, leaving the ego is impossible for many, thanks poet
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:03 PM
glad you enjoyed the poem, Yann. Yes, crucifying the ego is a challenge.
Velasco Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 7:01 PM
A profound meditation on humility and the soul’s expansion—your words invite readers to let go of ego and embrace connection, wonder, and love. Truly inspiring and deeply uplifting
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:02 PM
thanks for your insights regarding my poem. I'm grateful you found this poem both inspiring and uplifting. wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Godwin Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 4:00 PM
I inhaled this, each line a beautiful telling of truth. Divine writing, indeed. Poetry hugs and Amens ... CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:02 PM
awww, your comments are so thoughtful; they mean a great deal to me. hugs, Sara
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