Humility and Pride

Collaboration by Gordon McConnell and Regina Riddle

Signs of humility is so very hard to find
so many pump up self think they're swell
but they forget God who constantly looks
for humble hearts, of themselves won't tell

Everywhere there are people caught in pride
Focusing on their own self-seeking desires
Never thinking of the ways to give tender care
Not reflecting on all the things that love requires

Look around everywhere to see signs
most love self, love others to beat 
where's humility like Jesus would display?
Be last like Him washing others feet

Signs of pride in the heart is an easy discovery
Most of us seem to know about selfish conceit
We look around and see hearts living in defeat
Because they most often try hardest to compete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcintosh Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 6:20 AM
So glad you posted this... Blessings and prayers and maybe we can write something together again - if you like. Love and prayers to you and your family, Gina
Mcconnell Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Hi Gina, thanks again for sharing this collaboration with me, it was a joy to do and it would be great to do it again sometime. We wouldn't need to wait for a contest to do it would we? So if we have any particular idea in mind we should do it. Blessings and prayers,Gordon
Theraven Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Gordon, I like this Rhyme. I had to check out your page when I saw your comment. I was thinking 'who the heck is Gordon?' Well I won't make that mistake twice. Very nice collaboration with a very special poet in her own write. Hi Regina. -Richard
Mcconnell Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Hi Richard, thanks for your kind comment, also for checking out my page. Hope you're having a great weekend, over here in Scotland the winter is digging deep. Blessings,Gordon
Michael Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 4:58 AM
Well done...I like the message here
Mcconnell Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Arturo, Glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Gordon
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