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Humbly Kneel On Your Floor

Dear Lord

I come knocking at your unlocked door
  bend my knees, humbly kneel on your floor
    mercy for time spent on earth I ask
      for the sins and still unfinished task.

You have blessed me with nature's beauty,
  youth, family , and blissful duty
    and I wouldn't change any Your blessings
      just wish I would had heed your callings.

5/1/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/7/2021 11:59:00 AM

Eve, you are singing what I privately think all the time " just wish I would had heed your callings." This is often my silent song.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 5/5/2021 12:47:00 AM

This is simply awesome. Wow! Well said. I also wanted to thank you for the links you posted in your nursery rhyme contest. I am using them effectively to check my poems before posting. Thanks a lot. Take care, God bless! Hugs, Rama

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/4/2021 7:14:00 AM

Eve, Lovely unlocked door's gift for the first day of May. -Richard

Judy Ball

Date: 5/2/2021 9:10:00 PM

Wonderful |eve. A fave for me . Hope it's a winner. It is for me. God Bless, JB

John Fleming

Date: 5/1/2021 10:20:00 PM

The good book says that if a body sins all its life and then at the very last moment sincerely repents and calls upon our Lord God to forgive...the call shall be answered. To all those who say that God does not exist I say this: what caused the first spark, what set the Heavens into motion? The whole of life itself is nothing less than a complete and utter miracle. Nicely espoused, Eve...very nicely espoused. All my very best regards as always! :) john

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/1/2021 9:58:00 PM

Love this sincere and beautiful poetry, a poem and all the others that have given us here on soup such joy. May i add, that this too is a part a very precious part of your calling.

Simon Hamill

Date: 5/1/2021 5:36:00 PM

Beautiful,we all should be grateful for the time we have.thank you,and take care,simon