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edited on April 2, 2025 for the contest, The Bard's Birthday, sponsored by Oliver Mckeithan

 

humbling pride

My pride fell with my fortunes." William Shakespeare
As you like It --- Act 1, Scene 2, Rosalind to Orlando

pride of life does reign hoisting human nature’s gain toward downfall pain yon towering pride that offers triumphant ride lurks great fatal stride admitting own blight seek God’s help for righteous plight along divine light proud to be humble braced upon haughty spirit heart projects fake smile confident meekness hiding shaky fortitude melts midst shallow praise unmask arrogance repent from timid pretense with faith's blest triumph
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Mckeithan Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Beata, congrats on your placement in my contest. Well said. Proverbs-Pride goeth before a fall. And so it does. Blessings
Babcock Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Well said on pride and ego on this well written Senryu. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 5:44 AM
We fight off pride, what of those who don’t… what they miss out on…oh the treasured the Spirit showers upon those who will bend their knees. God bless you, Beata!
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