Sandra Adams Poet Rhyme

Humbled

amidst the dunes of restless seas
my arms outstretch in sorrowed pleas
beneath the lash of winds i fall
atop the grains of sands i crawl


April 25, 2020

Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden


From my poem written 12/07/2019
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/atop_these_grains_of_sand_1206046

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Hannington Mumo August 28, 2020 at 3:16 PM What effortless powerful rhymes...doubtless inked by the evidently sober poetic strokes of a painstakingly practiced quill! I wish the piece cascaded a little beyond a mere 4-line stanza. I'm sufficiently thrilled, all the same. Kudos!

Jerry T Curtis August 21, 2020 at 6:24 AM Very well done.... it's poetry like this that I'm glad that I can take the time to find.

Sheri Evans June 2, 2020 at 1:31 AM Loved this one, well done

Funom Makama April 30, 2020 at 12:03 AM Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome.

Gershon Wolf April 26, 2020 at 8:52 AM What an image you've depicted. Gotta go get a glass of water! ~ Desert Fox Sandra Adams April 26, 2020 at 8:40 PM lol...I hope you enjoy that wine... thank you do much... hugs

Vijay Pandit April 26, 2020 at 7:10 AM I feel the hints of poignancy amidst the dunes of restless sea..you chose a winning stanza for the contest, Sandy. Sandra Adams April 26, 2020 at 8:39 PM Thank you so much Vijay...my muse seems to like the poignant moments of life... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2020 at 4:52 AM Geat poem nice rhyming and a vivid picture portrayed. Hugs and love Sandy, Jennifer. Sandra Adams April 26, 2020 at 8:39 PM Thank you so much Jennifer... hugs, blessings and love :)

John Hamilton April 25, 2020 at 9:08 PM Nice one Sandy! Sandra Adams April 25, 2020 at 11:38 PM Thank you John :) hugs

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 25, 2020 at 4:49 PM Lovely! I think Greg will think so too. My best to you. xomo Sandra Adams April 25, 2020 at 6:31 PM Thank you...I hope all is well with you...my muse has been fickle... hugs :)