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Humbled

amidst the dunes of restless seas
my arms outstretch in sorrowed pleas
beneath the lash of winds i fall
atop the grains of sands i crawl


April 25, 2020

Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden


From my poem written 12/07/2019
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/atop_these_grains_of_sand_1206046

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Hannington Mumo Date: 8/28/2020 3:16:00 PM What effortless powerful rhymes...doubtless inked by the evidently sober poetic strokes of a painstakingly practiced quill! I wish the piece cascaded a little beyond a mere 4-line stanza. I'm sufficiently thrilled, all the same. Kudos! Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 8/21/2020 6:24:00 AM Very well done.... it's poetry like this that I'm glad that I can take the time to find. Login to Reply

Sheri Evans Date: 6/2/2020 1:31:00 AM Loved this one, well done Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 4/30/2020 12:03:00 AM Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/26/2020 8:52:00 AM What an image you've depicted. Gotta go get a glass of water! ~ Desert Fox Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 4/26/2020 8:40:00 PM lol...I hope you enjoy that wine... thank you do much... hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/26/2020 7:10:00 AM I feel the hints of poignancy amidst the dunes of restless sea..you chose a winning stanza for the contest, Sandy. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 4/26/2020 8:39:00 PM Thank you so much Vijay...my muse seems to like the poignant moments of life... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/26/2020 4:52:00 AM Geat poem nice rhyming and a vivid picture portrayed. Hugs and love Sandy, Jennifer. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 4/26/2020 8:39:00 PM Thank you so much Jennifer... hugs, blessings and love :)

John Hamilton Date: 4/25/2020 9:08:00 PM Nice one Sandy! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 4/25/2020 11:38:00 PM Thank you John :) hugs

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/25/2020 4:49:00 PM Lovely! I think Greg will think so too. My best to you. xomo Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 4/25/2020 6:31:00 PM Thank you...I hope all is well with you...my muse has been fickle... hugs :)