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Humanity Lost

You’re lacking humanity What does that mean? Your soul is empty Your thoughts unclean Feelings for others Will never come first Greed is your hunger Anger your thirst And when you die Old and alone Remember these thoughts It’s all you will own For all eternity There you shall lie No one mourning No one to cry Writhing in hell Is where you shall end And many will smile Good riddence, amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/31/2011 2:09:00 PM
Wow love it ! Would love to say this to a few people.
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations Tina on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:37:00 PM
a big bite! welcome..good luck
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:46:00 PM
Ouch! I can feel the heat from this one:) Hi welcome to the soup. I hope you continue to write and that you have a great time. R.M.
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:55:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. our contests are all free so check them out and good luck luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:11:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup thanks for sharing your work, look forward to reading more
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