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Humanity

that's a lot to take on such small shoulders, that burden to carry when you are not even that older.... The pressure of being best and being perfect, to know how to walk ,talk and how to act... To avoid being bullied by some kids , you try to dress up in the same way they did... In this world full of perfectionists , we always want to be on the top of list ... Forgetting there's much more than that to acquire, by doing good and helping those who require.... It's easy to go with the negative, chasing the darkness and not being positive.. atlast but not the least we must learn to be human atleast..... Thank you.......... By - vasudha shekhawat...... This is a poem which clearly shows the life of a young kid about how he sees the world and how he gradually becomes the part of this crowd where everyone wants to be completely perfect and wants to get idolized by others...Where he is not aware of what is important but only cares for how others want from him

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Date: 3/2/2018 11:42:00 PM
Read your poem "The Lane" recently so glad to see you have posted another. Interesting to read your take on a rather messed up world. Keep writing; you are on the right track. Hugs. Janece
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Vasudha Shekhawat
Date: 3/3/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much dear for reading my poems and understanding it ...You are doing a pretty amazing job with yours as well... I ll keep writing these kindof poems which help people to connect to the reality..Thanks once again..dear

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