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HUMANITY He sneaks stealthily Undetected Making use of the shadows Analyzing the surroundings Nondescript in appearance Indiscriminate in his selection The shooter Yellow coward 16 November 2017

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/19/2017 9:54:00 AM

For me the brevity of this piece adds to the impact. It allows the reader to develope the narrative. I could learn from this as a number of my pieces can be verbose.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/3/2018 9:29:00 AM

In backtracking contests I had entered I discovered this one in which I placed but not acknowledged. It came as a pleasant surprise to me that I placed and albeit late in acknowledging your comments, I wanted to thank you and let you know I appreciate your support.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/18/2017 12:04:00 PM

Thanks Curtis, very well written acrostic, succinctly spoken, congrats on a nice placement, maybe a little longer with more descriptors would place higher, just a suggestion!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/3/2018 9:33:00 AM

John, I ran across this win in your contest. I entered so many contests during a past time that I failed to notice I had placed. Thanks for selecting my entry and for the suggestion of lengthier lines. I appreciate the win and the encouragement.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/18/2017 4:32:00 AM

Nicely and thoughtfully-penned, Curtis - I have written a couple of pieces on this violence that keeps erupting. We need to keep talking and writing about it, I believe, it's not going to go away without concerted efforts to change the hearts of those who have lost the appreciation for life. Great acrostic, my friend, and congrats on your win!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/3/2018 9:35:00 AM

Hi, Greg! I just ran across this contest win and realized I had not responded to any of the congratulatory comments. I appreciate your invaluable support and encouragement.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/17/2017 4:37:00 AM

OOooo, such a grand write about these shootings we've been having lately! Yes, they are cowards, shooting innocent people, hiding behind a gun, and taking his frustrations off on people...so wrong in so many ways! I loved the way you wrote this...a difficult feat to do...writing an Acrostic with short lines! The Acrostic makes the lines so limited at the beginning of each line, that it is amazing that you could get the right words in so perfectly! What an ingenious poem my friend, Great Work!!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/3/2018 9:40:00 AM

Russell, I just ran across this today and realized I had missed the fact that I placed in the contest and failed to acknowledge the congratulatory comments. I have been praying for you but still trying to honor the fact that you are so busy with things as well as any other issues you may be dealing with. I appreciate your invaluable support and encouragement and pray that things will soon be on the upswing for you.