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Written on January 20, 2025

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Humanity



6. Fermat's Principle - Light takes the path that requires the least time when traveling from one point to another.


the thin shadow, trembling against the earth
the scent of a clinging leaf, crackling
like the last autumn wind – against the spirit
seeking hope in the melancholic drifting
so that I only see, just beyond the forest’s needs
relishing the breath of an unhurried moon
seeking her shelter in the stars who’re all strewn
like diamonds, floating on the everlasting 
pelting out songs – enchanting the twilight
pressing out words that mean more when they’re heard
by the midnight cool, where light grasps the truth
remembering the summer and all its fun
remembering the caress of yesterday’s sun
remembering…

taking the path of least resistance
breath of a prayer – light beyond compare
the wonder of knowing He is always there
and, whatever I say – His grace will always save
this is the gift He gave…
as His light plays out its game
giving each believer a new name
so when we reach heaven, we’re not all the same

it is the sea of light, the insight that I claim
because He took the blame
I can lay down all my shame
IT IS HIS LOVE I SHALL EXCLAIM!!!
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Evangeline Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 10:35 PM
Amen. God is never too far away to hear, and, like the shining light, His answers are never late.
Empress Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 11:48 PM
Dear sweet gina, your way with words always leave me in awe inspired and mesmerized by the beauty of your artistic wordplay, and how you paint imagery is beyond just creative! I love the ending too as always youv woven light within your soul , adding a final touch of infinite gratitude and faith! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your placement
mysore Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 11:27 PM
because of the quick reach, God is Light! lovely writing dear poet. how well you perceive divinity! incredible. congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
Poet Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Regina, your poetry is excellent. It tackles themes of hope, atonement, and the transformational power of Divine Love. It juxtaposes natural beauty with spiritual thought, culminating in a celebration of faith and grace. It also creates a realistic image of nature while including spiritual lessons. I also wanted to thank you for my excellent placement in your most recent contest. Best wishes for 2025!
Kauffman Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 11:54 AM
"Prayer," like light, "taking the path of least resistance!" Such a profound thought based in your faith, dear Gina. Truly there is nothing that can stop our prayer as it rises to God. This is really a stunning poem. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings and hugs, dear friend!
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