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Humanity

Humanity hungers
Hope seems to be lost today
Homelessness a problem.
Heaven's door far away
Heavier the heart lost
Happiness floats or flees
Heir of all things arms wait

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Vijay Pandit

September 4, 2023 at 6:53 AM

Your H words speak eloquently about both grief and joy of humanity. Winning wishes, Sara.

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 7:11 AM

Vijay, We as human are always facing a war within on two levels good and evil also on joy and happiness. Sara

Hiya Sharma

September 4, 2023 at 4:51 AM

A very powerful, insightful and thought-provoking take this is.. Loving the 'H' word-magic here, whilst these lines evoke a heartfelt and deep emotion.. The fading away of hope and emerging dark horizons are definitely palpable here.. "Heavier the heart lost" Deeply felt this..

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 7:10 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. Yes, it goes on two levels one for those saved and one for those lost. Sara

Jack Horne

September 4, 2023 at 4:19 AM

oh, very thought provoking indeed - must try this form

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 7:09 AM

Thank you, Jack. He waits with open arms. Sara

Stephan McBride

September 3, 2023 at 12:50 PM

All glory through Christ which separates one from this world of destruction, love your insightful poem of truth

Sara Kendrick

September 3, 2023 at 2:23 PM

Why, thank you, Stephen. I was hoping it would be helpful. Sara

Sotto Poet

September 3, 2023 at 12:17 PM

I adore your pleiades poem,Sara particularly the enchanting 'H' charm that illuminates it so gracefully! Your choice of perspective to convey the exploration of extensive imagery and interpretations is truly singular

Sara Kendrick

September 3, 2023 at 2:23 PM

Glad that you like it, Lasaad. I appreciate your kind review of my work. H can be happy, humble, healing, hopping, harmonious, healthy, heroic, and all kinds of wonderful things. Sara

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