Humanity

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Humanity hungers Hope seems to be lost today Homelessness a problem. Heaven's door far away Heavier the heart lost Happiness floats or flees Heir of all things arms wait

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/4/2023 6:53:00 AM

Your H words speak eloquently about both grief and joy of humanity. Winning wishes, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:11:00 AM

Vijay, We as human are always facing a war within on two levels good and evil also on joy and happiness. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 4:51:00 AM

A very powerful, insightful and thought-provoking take this is.. Loving the 'H' word-magic here, whilst these lines evoke a heartfelt and deep emotion.. The fading away of hope and emerging dark horizons are definitely palpable here.. "Heavier the heart lost" Deeply felt this..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:10:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. Yes, it goes on two levels one for those saved and one for those lost. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 4:19:00 AM

oh, very thought provoking indeed - must try this form

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:09:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. He waits with open arms. Sara

Stephan McBride

Date: 9/3/2023 12:50:00 PM

All glory through Christ which separates one from this world of destruction, love your insightful poem of truth

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2023 2:23:00 PM

Why, thank you, Stephen. I was hoping it would be helpful. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/3/2023 12:17:00 PM

I adore your pleiades poem,Sara particularly the enchanting 'H' charm that illuminates it so gracefully! Your choice of perspective to convey the exploration of extensive imagery and interpretations is truly singular

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2023 2:23:00 PM

Glad that you like it, Lasaad. I appreciate your kind review of my work. H can be happy, humble, healing, hopping, harmonious, healthy, heroic, and all kinds of wonderful things. Sara