Human Walls

If you can tear down those walls
And remain within them
And be that friend to all
When those walls are overrun
And being oppressed from outside
And never being that from within
And never forsake any other
Then you are a better human being
For living within those walls
And feeling first - and knowing more
Then you are for tearing them down
And becoming anything less
then you would become - being without them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 7, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder about. So much depth in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing! Thank you for stopping by to comment. Karen
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January 6, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Wonderfully written and definitely gets my mind working. Very deep.
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January 5, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Thought provoking and the wall is a good symbol! Luv, andrea
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January 5, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets .. may your stay be a long one.. and may your new year be filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. health... and great poetry like this delight.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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January 5, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Thought provoking write here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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