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Monoku

Tradition reigned in haiku writing until the 1970s when a variant to the haiku was invented. It became known as the monoku.

The monoku is a one-line poem variation of the haiku. Three writers of poetry in the 1970s made the monoku popular as a form of haiku. They are:

  • Marlene Mountain who wrote monoku in horizontal line
  • Hiroaki Sato who translated Japanese haiku into one line in English. Sometimes that line is in vertical rather than horizontal form
  • Matsuo Allard wrote essays in favor of the monoku form and published several magazines devoted to the form

Monoku is written as a single line which contains seventeen syllables or less. It includes a caesura (a pause) dictated by a sense or speech rhythm with little or no punctuation. The first word in the line is not capitalized and is in lowercase.

Human Tree - Example For Monoku New Year Contest

human tree's leaves fall, time ticks hope in fresh rebirth ~ sower of dreams
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Raven Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Hi Silent, love the content of your Monoku. (Hope in fresh rebirth) - (Sower of dreams) Says it all my friend. Excellent. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Roper Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 10:20 PM
love it, i just can't seem to get the hang of it....
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 8:34 AM
How lovely and uplifting, S.O. Janice
Trifiatis Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 5:42 AM
inspiring my friend!
Swartz Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 8:14 PM
saying so much in so little is a true art form. You perfected it!
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Very nice, Silent One. Sower of dreams we all are!!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Picture is a haunting accompaniment to your poem. What dreams will it sow...
Haskins Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Simplistic, no wasted words, and (Sower of dreams) says it all.
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Thank you..
Williams Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Fresh Rebirth, that's what its all about. Very Inspirational indeed, Si. So much in such a few words. Brilliant Monoku...Maria
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Maria..
Ashley Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:55 PM
Dreams need hope to grow into fruition and your lovely monoku beautifully conveys the message, Silent One. Gorgeous imagery my friend. ~Susan
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thank you Susan..
Hoffman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 8:50 PM
My monoku was way too long; this is an awesome example Silent One!~Che :)
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Che..
Godwin Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Thank you for the information, truly. I really like your line, well done. Happy New Year to you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
One Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Thank you CayCay..
Horsman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:08 PM
great, love the shower of dreams...
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Harry..
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Well done S-1; this has the right attributes of a true monoku. Dreams are meant to flourish, and hope is ideal compost for them. Regards // paul
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Thank you Paul, you are an expert in these, so I appreciate your feedback..
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Fantastic! Think my leaves are falling too! I'm sowing new dreams, as new to P.S.
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Good attitude to have.. Thank you Barbara..
May Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Very nice monoku Silent, best wishes
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Dutta Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Unique poem by a truly talented poet. Very Happy New Year. Best Wishes n Blessing always.
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Anisha..
Teagan Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Nice... I don't know if I could write a very good poem in so few words.
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, I am sure you could..
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Based on your photo I think I will take up gardening. Beautifully expressed monoku. Good luck in the contest.
Teagan Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:31 AM
LOL Rick :)
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:13 AM
haha.... Well, it is always good to sow dreams.. Thanks Richard..
Michael Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:31 AM
I like it...Maybe I'll try a Monoku too...All the best SO
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:13 AM
I am sure you will master it.. Thank you..
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Very deep Silent One..lovely metaphors..!
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Vijay, hope to see a monoku from you soon..
Barden Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Very nice, S1 - well-done! (And thanks for the info!)
Barden Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 10:30 PM
I apologize for the type-o.
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Mice? What mice? Lol.. Thanks Greg..
Kannan Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Wow... A perfect example... Loved it...
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Supraja..
Downing  Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Those human trees are beautiful yet nightmare... amazing dear Silent! Hugs and smiles :)
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:59 AM
Indeed the can be... Thank you Kina..
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