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This is my way of looking at a certain subject under attack some of the words are the Lord's

Let's start this issue with hard facts believe it or not the seed is now planted from our Lord's spoken words lets address this world openly honest It only fills us with the wind and the emptiness of pride Now lets count the cost of innocent lives through greed and human sacrifice corrupted where peace no longer exists a humane body of love Divine lightening is coming with it we lock our doors the three dark days of darkness lets not forget when His Supreme Justice falls into chaos The sins of this time outweigh past chastisements The wrath of His force is Almighty has never been seen before when slaying the dragon crushing him with His Power The low key figure that he is we need to bolt our doors shut soon as this world is in deep turmoil no one reads the sign of the cross He who is coming our Jerusalem King and Saviour Sweet Son of the Father In Spirit baptised and confirmed by the spear of Destiny striking down petition once and for all eternity in that battlefield we will lose some of those whom you loved dearly Into the end prayer could not save them from this awful emptiness left behind under a trail of smoke remains shamed tears of choice under ashes blown away

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Donna Loughman

Date: 9/27/2017 4:41:00 PM

Liam, Your poem highlights the spiritual warfare we are locked in during this turbulent time in the world. Excellent write!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2017 1:30:00 AM

- An excellent and powerful poem, Liam - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/26/2017 5:31:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all.This is the end of days, all the signs are there to be seen according to the Bible, Liam.It makes me very sad all that's going in the world .Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more and more for everything and all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^