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Human Nature Contest

The sun softly stirs the strawberry tree Provokes a lovely green bird to hop out They snuggle and fondle when the cocks croak A young boy joins them in a smiling spree A happy farmer throws up rings of smoke ‘Bill, come here’, came from mom a tender shout ‘Good morning’, said the white crest from the sea The soft morning moves into a dense day The sea starts conversation with the shores The light brown wheat fields soak up some cool sun Fishermen jostle for space at the quay Traffic jam on narrow roads has begun The mom is busy in her household chores They have two kids and the third on the way How magnificent is the setting sun The happy bird hops back into its nest Darkness falls and slowly mingles with light Mom speaks to the guests at her house in turn On Bill’s birthday the stars are shining bright It is indeed a splendid fun food fest I take a dark chocolate and a bun Commotion fades making room for silence In the wake of a bright star and the moon The green bird chats with the sun in its dream Bill looks up his grandpa in the lucence His sister reads on how to become slim The guard shuts the doors at The Pantaloons The owl is busy in a conference ---------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 2/16/2016 5:21:00 PM
Impressive Human Nature-4 stanza,/7 lines..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2016 4:23:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/16/2016 1:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2016 4:24:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 2/13/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest! Very descriptive....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/14/2016 10:34:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/13/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment. PD
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/14/2016 10:38:00 AM
!Muy bien¡
Date: 2/13/2016 2:33:00 AM
Greetings Probir. Congrats for your WIN, with this wonderful verse!!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/12/2016 9:28:00 PM
This is full of color and charming images and the small surprises of personification . A well deserved win. SuZ
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/12/2016 5:51:00 PM
Probir, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/12/2016 4:42:00 PM
Very nice, Probir, and congrats on your placing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/4/2016 9:20:00 AM
Much to be gathered from this poem , life is busy, life is mysterious, life is imaginative, life is forever moving onward. A7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2016 11:01:00 AM
Right Robert. Thanks. But in retrospect I find one important aspect missing. The tragedy of human life. Two lines could have been comfortably accommodated on death. Thank you.
Date: 2/2/2016 11:26:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem immensely, Probir! What a masterful and amazing write! A big 7 from me! I hoe your poem is right on top of the contest results:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/3/2016 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Laura...

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