Probir Gupta Poet Than-Bauk

Human Folly

Carl is handsome
Beth says come dear
Awesome affair

Beth’s spouse comes close
Breaks Carl’s nose bone
Fierce blows rain soon

Quick comes Carl’s wife
Like sharp knife edge 
Life rife with pulls
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20 February 2016
Than-Bauk on Human Folly – Poetry Contest by Marugu Mo
Syllables 36
Checked on: www.howmanysyllables.com

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 21, 2016 at 12:51 PM Very witty, Probir. Nice twist on human folly. You inspired me to write a than-bauk poem. I liked this one very much though. Keep up the good writing. Love you always. Probir Gupta October 22, 2016 at 1:04 AM Thank you ...

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 5:52 PM Probir, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~ Probir Gupta March 16, 2016 at 1:19 AM Many thanks LINDA. ....love..probir....

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM You did a good job with this one, Probir! Probir Gupta March 13, 2016 at 11:59 PM Thank you....

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2016 at 8:48 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats..Sara Probir Gupta March 11, 2016 at 9:57 AM Thank you...

Vladislav Raven March 11, 2016 at 8:34 AM Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad. Probir Gupta March 11, 2016 at 8:45 AM Thank you Vlad...

Anindya Mohan Tagore February 26, 2016 at 12:04 PM Lovely! Sir. Warm regards, Bobby

Timothy Hicks February 22, 2016 at 3:34 PM Human folly indeed! I think this particular folly is rather an epidemic on society ... too many broken hearts, not enough mending, and too much throwing away. Good than-bauk and good luck! Probir Gupta February 23, 2016 at 3:35 AM True. Thank you...