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Human Eclipse

There are eclipses no sky records.  
The kind that passes through the body  
without warning~  
a sudden dimming  
of what I thought I understood.  

Sometimes it’s a memory  
sliding between me and the present,  
blue-dark and familiar,  
carrying its own gravity.  

Sometimes it’s a silence  
from someone I love,  
a shadow cast across the heart  
that makes everything else  
go briefly still.  

Curiosity rises in these moments~  
not the bright kind,  
but the quiet wondering  
of what part of me  
is being asked to change.  

I’ve learned that human eclipses  
aren’t catastrophes.  
They’re thresholds.  
They ask me to stand in the dimness  
long enough to see  
what the light was hiding.  

And when the shadow moves on,  
I don’t return to who I was.  
I step into illumination,  
carrying the shape of the dark  
as part of my own orbit.
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Hind Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 10:41 PM
wise words <3
Gibbons Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 1:33 PM
Wow Sara spectacular write ✍️ loved picture you used too went so well with your ink. A real pleasure reading this. So powerful ending ❤️‍🩹🌹hugzzz friend
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:24 PM
awww thank you, Dorothy. Your enthusiasm made my day. hugs from Texas, Sara
Rolland Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 6:06 AM
this is absolutely wonderful, the metaphor at his best, will remember your poem Bon dimanche chère poétesse
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:24 PM
wow Yann.....humbly grateful for your comments....wishing you well
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Those memory lapses seem to get worse as we age, Sara B., but I see you probably wrote this in your younger years so it must have to do with the changes that go on during those up and down years. I enjoyed reading it anyway. From the title, I was wondering what it could mean. Thank you for sharing it with us. 👍. Sara K.
Smith  Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 4:35 AM
What a beautifully introspective piece, Sara. Your metaphor of the "human eclipse" perfectly captures those sudden, quiet moments of internal shift. The imagery of the "blue-dark and familiar" memory sliding into the present is striking and deeply evocative. I especially love your concluding thought that these shadows aren't catastrophes but thresholds, leaving us changed and carrying the dark as part of our own orbit. Thank you for sharing such profound and resonant free verse.❤️
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 4:32 AM
This poem brilliantly portrays the nuanced and profound nature of self-discovery and development, dear Sara. Eclipse imagery conveys reflection and transformation. Evocative language creates a thoughtful tone that takes the reader from darkness to brightness.
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