Human Being Or Beast?

I have received an obscene comment
from a sick, slandering mouth on this poetry site,
calling me a filthy monkey with intense anger;
and is this person a human being or beast?
And how would I address this demon: sir or
madam? I use no discretion when dealing with fools,
and let them hear and feel the deep tone 
of my thundering voice, bringing on a violent storm...
o idiot, approached by the Devil to manipulate such a worthless soul


You've picked your target, lashing at us with uncontrolled madness,
is your behavior, so bizarre and extremely rude, to embarass,
to harass and harm us? Be warned, it is to no avail...
the fairest reward for your obscenities is Hell! 
You are messing with the creative minds of modest folks,
willing and ready to fight back and triumph over your wickedness!
Has Satan and his Fallen Angels ever conquered Heaven?
Will you, with your envy and vengeful words ever defeat us? 


We are honorable, unfeigned, dignified and loved for our sharedl kindness,
and that makes us extraordinary beings among the unintelligent criminals,
who mortify, demoralize, threat, abuse, and kill the very essence of morality;
we excel in our unique and remarkable ideas that make many tremble,
and you will tremble at the appearance of the Archaengel of Vengeance!
Our spirit will not be demeaned by your constant and horrible curses,
we are united in this fight, not to let you seal our mouths with silence!
Was Brutus or Hamlet a human being or beast? Do you see a disparity?


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/13/2009 2:11:00 PM
Excellent write Andrew, it is probably the same numpty who has appeared a couple of time, well said Sir >> James
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:12:00 AM
This persona insulting you insulted me too and mny of my friends,dont worry..nobody can breal the bond of a family we soupers share,thats what matters,pray for his insanity my friend-Charma
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:03:00 AM
Soup mail for you, Andrew.
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Date: 10/10/2009 9:58:00 AM
Thank you for being so frank in this poem, Andrew. Who knows why "demons" are allowed to infiltrate the Soup and try to spread pain and hatred. Guess this "beast" is doomed to suffer at the hands of God. Thankfully, we can block him/her from commenting on our work. (He/She doesn't seem to know his/her gender.) The Soup needs to track his/her ISP address. The threats he's made are unscionable and have criminal consequences! Some of us laugh it off, but others are deeply hurt. Thanks again!
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