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Human Being

I am but a speck of dirt, In the cosmos and this universe On this place, orbiting a sun I am but sand, a human being Sand that thinks of itself a mountain The wind can pick me up and drop me, All that at its will

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Date: 3/31/2024 8:25:00 PM
Hello Arastu, I like your metaphor in the first line that gets extended to sand and the wind that has the power to move. A fine write that conveys human frailty in the face of forceful nature. I enjoyed reading your posting. Be well. Brian
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 4/9/2024 9:04:00 PM
Thank you :)

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