Human Bacon

I go out seeking the sun's rays

Cool
White
Plump
Moist

I lay there torturing myself

Hot
Sizzling
Salty
Turning

I return inside

Dry
Brown
Wrinkled
Done?????????

©Donna Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 12:10 PM
oh and I see it was a featured poem a long time ago. BIG congrats for that.
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 12:09 PM
hahaha. how did I ever miss THIS one? Wish I could be bacon right now!!!
A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 4:08 PM
HI DONNA, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Dom Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 3:36 AM
In a word - excellent!
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Thanks....I now have better sense....
Thorn Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 4:35 AM
This describes me when I was 13-14-15 or so. Always out for the tan...no longer though, after losing my Nan to Melanoma 5 years ago. Not something anyone should go through.
Jones Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Yes I agree...I learned my lesson the day this was inspired
Ellison Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Got a kick out of this one, dear Donna! Reminds me of my many vacations in Florida! Yee haw! Hugsss!
Jones Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Yee haw is about right...soooooo stupid.... I felt stupid that day...
Jerden Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:29 AM
I love this... but it kinda makes me hungry. Cheers, Roy
Jones Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Well that much sun and bacon are both bad for you hahahaha thanks for reading
Johnson Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 4:09 PM
Your a hoot. Sizzle on, but use some spf.
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Gotcha!!!
Wilson Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:27 PM
hmmmnn...guess I have been here before in the old days before 2 of my dear friends got skin cancer...very good piece Donna...luv,Deb
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Yeah....I've learned my lesson.....
Sivey Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Ha ha, this is a very clever write my friend! I am enamored by this wondrous poem! What a terrific piece Donna! Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Russell...glad ya liked it
Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Ouch! Jack
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Yeah I know...but it's how I felt one day after sun tanning too long.....
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