Tom Larrow Poet Tail-rhyme

Human

A game of conflict played on earth
Id battles Ego to find mirth
Will a soul be won or lost?

Life's conflict poisoned to it's end
Can't find joy, always on the mend
God holds your soul at all cost.





5-10-2012   "Tail-Rhyme"

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Joe Maverick October 14, 2012 at 1:17 PM Enjoyed reading the tale and its endiing here Tom, Also see you've bagged a win with it..! (well done)

Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2012 at 2:06 PM A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Tom. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2012 at 12:54 PM That Id and Ego brings me grief some days or maybe most days..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2012 at 9:10 PM Congratulations on the winners' circle, Tom. Tom Larrow May 14, 2012 at 9:22 PM Thank you, I truly enjoyed reading "A State of Mind" it's all in your perception! Congrats on your excellent poem and well deserved win.

Ralph Taylor May 14, 2012 at 7:37 PM Congrats on your win, Tom. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Debra Squyres May 14, 2012 at 3:55 PM And he holds it safely always, if we let Him. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

Kash Poet May 14, 2012 at 11:57 AM Congrats Tom on your win.Very good Tail Rhyme.

Deborah Burch May 14, 2012 at 11:38 AM Congratulations on your win Tom!! huggs, deb

David Williams May 14, 2012 at 11:32 AM Tom , congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A May 10, 2012 at 7:21 PM Tom, enjoyed stopping by..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2012 at 2:49 PM Well done rhyme Tom, and good words.- oxox hug Anne-Lise