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A game of conflict played on earth Id battles Ego to find mirth Will a soul be won or lost? Life's conflict poisoned to it's end Can't find joy, always on the mend God holds your soul at all cost. 5-10-2012 "Tail-Rhyme"

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Date: 10/14/2012 1:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the tale and its endiing here Tom, Also see you've bagged a win with it..! (well done)
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Date: 5/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Tom. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2012 12:54:00 PM
That Id and Ego brings me grief some days or maybe most days..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the winners' circle, Tom.
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, I truly enjoyed reading "A State of Mind" it's all in your perception! Congrats on your excellent poem and well deserved win.
Date: 5/14/2012 7:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tom. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:55:00 PM
And he holds it safely always, if we let Him. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Tom on your win.Very good Tail Rhyme.
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tom!! huggs, deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:32:00 AM
Tom , congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:21:00 PM
Tom, enjoyed stopping by..pd
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:49:00 PM
Well done rhyme Tom, and good words.- oxox hug Anne-Lise
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