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Hum a Little Moonbee Tune

I bet moonbees sting
And zap when they zing
I'll wager it's true
They love flowers too...

In hot Texas heat
At high-noon we meet
She guns me down cold
With bullets of gold

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Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 7:42 PM

Nice tribute

Ismael Nieves

October 31, 2009 at 9:44 PM

Boy, boy, boy. Tremendous! lol ...so hilarious. And those comments...very,very hot.

Tim Ryerson

October 27, 2009 at 6:06 AM

Debbeeee... I taak mo dan silvah bullet to knock dis ole swamp-rat down...din we git rhaahd back up and start gnawin' agin, sha! (I wish!)...You got me started on dialect stuff, you know! Thanks for the comment! - Tim

Moonbee Canady

October 25, 2009 at 3:28 PM

Oh... I Forgot To Mention ... I Do Indeed Love Flowers (Haven't You Heard Of 'The Yellow Rose of Texas LOL) This is Definitely Going Into My FAVORITES .... MoonBee

Moonbee Canady

October 25, 2009 at 3:26 PM

Tim, Timmy ... You Killing Me Boy... I'm Speechless ! (But In A Wonderful Kinda Way) Smile... I Love This Poem, Tim. You Got Me In Your Sights - So To Speak (LOL) Funny You Should Mention High Noon (I have that in one of my poems... Let You Know Which One- Smile) Oh, And Thank You For Giving Me High-Calibre-Gold Bullets - I Only Go For The Gold Ha Ha... And I Promise, If and When We Meet ... I'll Be MoonBee Sweet (smile) Your Poet Pal ... MoonBee

John Freeman

October 23, 2009 at 9:03 PM

Maybe so Tim, Watch Out! Hilarious, Sincerly Moses

James Fraser

October 23, 2009 at 5:31 AM

Delightful rhyme Tim >> James

Donna Golden

October 22, 2009 at 10:41 PM

"She guns me down cold with bullets of gold".....LOVE IT! Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

October 22, 2009 at 4:39 PM

spicey mind picture..why bullets of gold? are you a different kind of man? I know silver bullets are for werewolves? LOL Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 22, 2009 at 2:43 PM

MoonBee is going to love this when she sees it. She is a darling. Thank you for sharing Tim. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

October 22, 2009 at 2:03 PM

guns you down cold with bullets of gold.like stinging you wasnt enough..lovele poem..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

October 22, 2009 at 6:16 AM

Tim, I've never seen a "moonbee," but I love the way you describe the way they interact with flowers, yet have the power to gun you "down cold With bullets of gold." Awesome writing, my friend! Love, Carolyn