Huh

three trotting turtles slowly raise a cloud of dust neck and neck finish six hissing serpents surreptitiously slither escaping their pasts three city ground hogs shaking their "jay-lo" booties cross against the light John G. Lawless ©6/13/2023

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Paul Willason

Date: 6/14/2023 5:41:00 PM

Just love how your imaginaton stitches all this together....clever. entertaing read John, regards Paul.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/14/2023 3:10:00 PM

John your creativity has no bounds my friend it is shown here. lol...

Lin Lane

Date: 6/13/2023 8:02:00 PM

Huh? Turtles trotting, and ground hogs coming out of their city holes to cross against a traffic light? Three dead ground hogs and I want to know what you've been drinking.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/14/2023 5:36:00 AM

Gators on the front porch And bear climbing trees in DC! WTF is right!

John Lawless
Date: 6/14/2023 5:26:00 AM

HUH.....an older generations....WTF....WE've got turkeys on the street corners, deer in the playground and coyotes outside the coffee shop...